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I was so obsessed with martians because the green-eyed fighting machines they built so I made this slideshow about it
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I was so obsessed with martians because the green-eyed fighting machines they built so I made this slideshow about it
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Hello George. I like that you have made a presentation about martians and all kinds of them. I have never really heard of them so it was good that you made a post about to make it more known. Do you think that you could add a bit more description to them such as how do they attack or are there any other features on martians? Aside from that Good work!
ReplyDeleteHi goerge what a great post and It's cool how you write a story about tank bye!!!!!
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