hi guys i made a slide about the titanic sinking animation because i love the titanic here it is
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 16, 2021
The Titanic disaster
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Hey George, this animation is fantastic. I love the way you have been able to retell the Titanic disaster. Remember to use capital letters at the start of your sentences. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi George, I'm Matilda/Tilly from Kokatahi school. I am really interested in the titanic. it looks really good but what is the boat at the end. Bye.
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